Adelyn's writing has really taken off this year and I am constantly amazed at the level at which she can write. Her class spent a lot of time talking about opinion papers and how to convince someone to believe your opinion. Each child got to write about anything of their choice for their opinion paper. Adelyn kept it a big secret and wouldn't even let Brian know what she was working on when he would come to volunteer in her class.
When she brought her paper home, I really couldn't disagree with anything she wrote which I think is the sign of a very good writer.
Dear Mom and Dad,
Have you ever wanted a cute little pet to watch on rainy days?
In my opinion a fish would be the perfect family pet. Here's why:
One reason I think a fish would be the perfect pet is, fish are very quiet so it wouldn't distrub you all the time. Another reason I think a fish would be the best pet is, it will make me more responsible. A fish would make me responsible because I would need to clean its tank and feed it.
Finally, a fish would be the best pet because, you wouldn't need to pay for everything. I would pay for food and more!
I hope I have convinced you that a fish would be the perfect pet for many reasons.
Love,
Addy